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　一、課程安排：

　　1、考研寫(xiě)作總論：復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃、時(shí)間分配、寫(xiě)作學(xué)習(xí)、大綱解讀

　　2、段落寫(xiě)作：框架結(jié)構(gòu)、啟承轉(zhuǎn)合、段落寫(xiě)作經(jīng)典范文

　　3、圖畫(huà)作文：

　　4、詞匯寫(xiě)作、句子寫(xiě)作

　　5、應(yīng)用文：書(shū)信、備忘錄、報(bào)告、摘要、告示

　　二、復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃：

　　1、攻克詞匯：

　　1) 詞匯書(shū)：

　　2) 軟件：《新東方背單詞》(5)

　　3)記憶法：blog.sina.com.cn/jtwang分類：考研復(fù)習(xí)：十天攻克考研詞匯

　　2、精研真題：96-09共14年真題

　　1)詞匯：

　　2)選項(xiàng)：

　　3)句子結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　4)背誦：閱讀A節(jié)經(jīng)典文章

　　5)英譯漢：閱讀A節(jié)、C節(jié)經(jīng)典文章

　　6)寫(xiě)作真題：

　　3、適當(dāng)�？迹�2010年1月

　　三、時(shí)間分配：

　　1)14：00-14：15 寫(xiě)作A節(jié)

　　2)14：15-14：50 寫(xiě)作B節(jié)

　　3)14：50-16：00 閱讀A節(jié)

　　4)16：00-16：20 閱讀B節(jié)

　　5)16：20-16：40 閱讀C節(jié)

　　6)16：40-17：00 完型填空

　　四、寫(xiě)作學(xué)習(xí)：

　　(一) 提高實(shí)力：

　　1、 中譯英：仔細(xì)對(duì)比原文，尋找差距

　　2、 背誦：滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善

　　3、 默寫(xiě)：仔細(xì)對(duì)比原文，發(fā)現(xiàn)寫(xiě)作弱點(diǎn)

　　4、 仿寫(xiě)：

　　(二)掌握技巧：萬(wàn)能框架

　　附：20大必背范文：

　　(一)小作文：

　　1、新版考研寫(xiě)作教材(09年6月版，下同)P.3 最新考研英語(yǔ)大綱樣題

　　2、P.5 2005年高分作文

　　3、P.5 2006年高分作文

　　4、P.6 2007年高分作文

　　5、2008年范文：題目見(jiàn)P.6

　　Dear Bob,

　　I’m writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the “the Beatles” CD to you when I left Canada. I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn’t have made such a stupid mistake.

　　Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormously. I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price. If you do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.

　　Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.

　　Faithfully yours,

　　Li Ming

　　6、P.7 2009年范文

　　Dear Editors,

　　I have been reading your newspaper for many years with a great enthusiasm and interest. It is my view that limiting/prohibiting the use of disposable plastic bags is of utmost significance.

　　To crack this hard nut, I would like to give/offer/render/propose several useful/practical recommendations as follows. First and foremost, it is imperative for us to ban the free use of disposable plastic bags. In addition, we should develop possible alternative forms to replace them, such as paper or clothing bags. Last but not least, plastic bags should be offered in a much higher price in department stores or supermarkets.

　　I hope you would find the above proposals conducive and I would like to discuss this matter to further details. Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7、

　　Directions:

　　You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.

　　Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation. I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

　　I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.

　　To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned. I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　8.

　　Directions:

　　One of your friends wants to apply for a job working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter to recommend him/her, describe his/her past experience, and explain the reasons.

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am writing to recommend one of my best friends, Zhou Botong, for this post. With his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality, he was elected chairperson of the Student Union of Tsinghua University several times.

　　Busy as he was, he completed his major, teenage psychology, with an outstanding school record. Upon graduation he was assigned to be a teacher in Tsinghua Middle School. What is more, he loves his job and enjoys working with children. This won him great popularity among his students.

　　Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised. I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　9.

　　Directions: After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by Mr. Shakespeare. Write a special letter to express your thanks.

　　Dear Mr. Shakespeare,

　　I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.

　　If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.

　　Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　10、

　　Directions:

　　The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

　　1) the purpose of the contest,

　　2) time and place of the contest,

　　3) what is required of the candidates,

　　4) details of the judges and awards.

　　You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.

　　Chinese Speaking Contest

　　January 10, 2009

　　To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (17 January) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.

　　The Students’ Union

　　Department of Chinese Language and Literature

　　參 考 譯 文

　　1、

　　尊敬的先生或女士：

　　我寫(xiě)信是為了詢問(wèn)關(guān)于雅思考試的考試準(zhǔn)備資料的信息。

　　我想知道您是否有一本包括雅思考試所需詞匯的詞匯書(shū)，以及有答案和范文的歷年試卷。其次，我應(yīng)該如何付款——通過(guò)現(xiàn)金、支票還是其他任何方式?如果可能的話，我想使用信用卡。最后，這些書(shū)如何送來(lái)，我大約什么時(shí)間可以收到?如果額外費(fèi)用不多的話，請(qǐng)您最好使用特快郵件。

　　如果您能盡快答復(fù)，我將非常感謝。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　2、

　　尊敬的王先生：

　　十分感激您兩個(gè)月之前聘用我為雜志《設(shè)計(jì)與時(shí)尚》的編輯。我非常珍惜這個(gè)和您以及其他同事共事的機(jī)會(huì)。這將是我一生中的難忘經(jīng)歷。

　　但是，對(duì)于一個(gè)喜歡計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)遠(yuǎn)多于時(shí)尚設(shè)計(jì)的年輕人來(lái)說(shuō)，我認(rèn)識(shí)到目前的工作并不符合我的教育背景與個(gè)人能力。因此，我決定辭職，找一份與我從前教育背景相關(guān)的工作。

　　我為離開(kāi)可能造成的不便深表歉意。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　3、

　　尊敬的先生或女士：

　　希望工程這項(xiàng)高尚的事業(yè)感動(dòng)了我，同時(shí)這項(xiàng)工程迄今所取得的成就也鼓舞了我。因此，我想通過(guò)給貴省偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的一個(gè)孩子提供經(jīng)濟(jì)幫助，來(lái)為希望工程貢獻(xiàn)我的微薄之力。

　　如果您能幫助我找到一個(gè)剛開(kāi)始上學(xué)但家庭無(wú)法為其負(fù)擔(dān)學(xué)費(fèi)的小女孩，我將不勝感激。本人計(jì)劃按年度支付她的學(xué)費(fèi)直至她中學(xué)畢業(yè)。我希望把捐款直接匯給她的家人在當(dāng)?shù)亻_(kāi)設(shè)的銀行帳戶中。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　4、

　　尊敬的先生/女士：

　　我是本校的一名學(xué)生，常來(lái)圖書(shū)館度過(guò)業(yè)余時(shí)間�？偠�言之，您這里提供的服務(wù)相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)，但我有一些建議希望您采納。如果您能好心考慮我的建議，我將非常感謝。

　　首先，是否可以請(qǐng)您延長(zhǎng)閱讀時(shí)間?在白天，大多數(shù)學(xué)生在上課，來(lái)不了圖書(shū)館。其次，書(shū)架上有些書(shū)已經(jīng)過(guò)時(shí)了。如果您能好心提供一些例如最新雜志等的書(shū)籍，我們將非常感謝。

　　我確實(shí)希望擁有一個(gè)更加舒適的圖書(shū)館。再次感謝您的時(shí)間和關(guān)注。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　5、

　　親愛(ài)的鮑勃：

　　我寫(xiě)此信的目的是為了向你道歉。在離開(kāi)加拿大時(shí)，我忘了把那盤(pán)披頭士樂(lè)隊(duì)的CD還給你。走的時(shí)候太匆忙了，我把所有東西都塞到行李中，沒(méi)有仔細(xì)檢查。當(dāng)時(shí)要是多加注意的話，就不會(huì)犯這種低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤了。

　　因?yàn)槲抑�道你特別珍愛(ài)那盤(pán)CD，所以一定要想辦法解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。我可以寄快遞包裹給你，也可以按合理的價(jià)格賠償你的損失。如果你不介意的話，我也可以在下次去加拿大的時(shí)候把它給你帶回去。

　　請(qǐng)?jiān)诜奖愕臅r(shí)候盡快讓我知道你傾向哪一種解決方案。希望你能接受我真誠(chéng)的道歉。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　6、

　　尊敬的編輯：

　　多年來(lái)我一直懷著極大的熱情與興趣閱讀貴報(bào)。我認(rèn)為限制使用一次性塑料袋非常重要。

　　為解決這個(gè)難題，我想提出如下幾個(gè)實(shí)用的建議。首先，我們急需禁止免費(fèi)使用一次性塑料袋。其次，我們應(yīng)該開(kāi)發(fā)取代塑料袋的替換方式，如紙袋或布袋。最后，在商場(chǎng)或超市應(yīng)以更高的價(jià)格提供塑料袋。

　　我希望您覺(jué)得上述建議有益，同時(shí)希望進(jìn)一步討論這一問(wèn)題。十分感謝您對(duì)我的建議給予及時(shí)的關(guān)注。

　　您真誠(chéng)的

　　李明

　　7、

　　尊敬的先生或女士：

　　我寫(xiě)信是為了表達(dá)關(guān)于住宿的不滿。由于我發(fā)現(xiàn)目前的居住狀況很不方便，我想下學(xué)期搬到一個(gè)單間。

　　我需要解釋的是，我不滿的原因是我室友不體諒的行為。首先，他的朋友經(jīng)常來(lái)訪。其次，他經(jīng)常舉辦一些吵鬧的聚會(huì)。

　　為了解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，我希望引起有關(guān)當(dāng)局的注意。我相信您也會(huì)同意，唯一的解決措施是搬到一個(gè)我自己的房間。因此，如果您可以給我找一個(gè)最好不在同樓，但離校園越近越好的單間，我將非常感謝。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　8、

　　尊敬的先生或女士：

　　我寫(xiě)信是為了推薦我最好的一個(gè)朋友周伯通申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位。由于擁有杰出的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力和令人愉快的個(gè)性，他多次當(dāng)選清華大學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席。

　　盡管他很忙，但他完成了自己的學(xué)業(yè)——青少年心理學(xué)，并取得了出色的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)。畢業(yè)之后，他被分配到清華附中做一名教師。此外，他熱愛(ài)自己的職業(yè)并喜歡和孩子們工作。這使他在學(xué)生中很受歡迎。

　　因此，我毫不猶豫推薦他作為您招聘職位的理想候選人。我確信您將做出雇用他的明智選擇。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　9、

　　尊敬的莎士比亞先生：

　　我寫(xiě)信是為了表達(dá)我衷心的感謝。我指的是那天我被一輛出租車從自行車上撞下來(lái)的不幸事件。

　　如果沒(méi)有您給予我的第一手的及時(shí)幫助的話，恐怕后果會(huì)更嚴(yán)重。大家都認(rèn)為正是您在那個(gè)緊急事件中的快速反應(yīng)才導(dǎo)致了滿意的后果。

　　盡管現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人談?wù)摰酱蠊珶o(wú)私的必要性，但是我們看到很少有人言行一致。如果有更多人像您的話，世界會(huì)更加美好。

　　您真誠(chéng)的，

　　李明

　　10、

　　中文演講比賽

　　2009年1月10日

　　為提高同學(xué)們中文演講的能力并豐富課外活動(dòng)，中文系學(xué)生會(huì)將于下周六(1月17日)在學(xué)生大禮堂組織全校中文演講比賽。有興趣參加的同學(xué)請(qǐng)于下周二之前在本班班長(zhǎng)處報(bào)名。我們將邀請(qǐng)五位教授擔(dān)任評(píng)委，并將給前六名獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)哒哳C獎(jiǎng)。歡迎大家積極參加。

　　中文系學(xué)生會(huì)

　　(二)大作文

　　1.98年范文：考題見(jiàn)教材16頁(yè)

　　The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a variety of promises have been arising from all walks of life. Regretfully, quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsense, just as the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to lay eggs which are round without any angles and corners and have shells, egg whites and yolks.

　　Odd and funny as they sound, such false promises can be seen and heard everywhere in our country. Administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes; manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine commodities and polite and enthusiastic services. Can you find anything new and substantial other than their obligations, duties and jobs in these so called promises? I guess your answer will be negative. As a matter of fact, their intention to make such commitments is nothing but to put on civilized outer clothing to please or deceive the public.

　　I dare say that our society is suffering corruption and cheat which are causing damage to society both materially and morally. But the hen and her like should know that by dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition under market economy system. They should remember the old saying, “Honesty is the best policy”.

　　2.01年范文：考題見(jiàn)教材18頁(yè)

　　When we use the word “l(fā)ove”, we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word. The picture below illustrates the real meaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes. As a matter of fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the most sublime of human emotions.

　　As an illustration of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of the deadly earthquake in Sichuan Province. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can——be it money or goods——to help their needy fellow citizens. Furthermore, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves.

　　It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.

　　3.02范文：考題見(jiàn)教材18頁(yè)

　　The picture vividly depicts a lovely American girl in traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face. She wears ribbons, necklaces and other accessories that are characteristic of the clothes of a certain Chinese minority group. Undoubtedly, the costume has added oriental charm/glamour to her beautiful look/appearance/features.

　　What the picture conveys goes far beyond only/merely a new fashion trend. Instead, it carries cultural meanings/implications as well. The fact that people from different countries are attracted to mysterious Chinese culture indicates that to some extent a culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared internationally. In other words, a nation’s unique/distinctive culture can become international through worldwide economic and cultural exchanges. Since the trend of globalization become irresistible, the increasing cultural exchanges can effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship.

　　It is my view that national culture as priceless spiritual treasure should be preserved and cherished. Meanwhile, there are good reasons to advocate international culture for those ideas from the other cultures, controversial or even absurd at first sight, can provide a different perspective for us to observe the world in the long run. Nevertheless, when we are confronted with a different culture, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and to resist its dark side. Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our world dimensional, colorful and vigorous.

　　4.03年范文：考題見(jiàn)教材19頁(yè)

　　The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse that shelters it from the threatening lightning and storm. With proper temperature, moisture and fertilizer, the flower is growing in full bloom. On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals scattered on the ground.

　　To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that the flower growing in the green house cannot withstand the test of the storm, yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously. The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people, to be specific, the only children in our current society; the greenhouse epitomizes parents’ doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the storms, or the harsh reality. Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.

　　Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings. On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world.

　　5.06年范文：考題見(jiàn)教材20頁(yè)

　　As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the smart British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among the adolescents. In the first picture, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face. The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face. In the second photo, another young man is doing Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop. We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol’s haircut.

　　Undoubtedly, the pictures have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the teenagers nowadays. Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans. Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols. Briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.

　　Hence, idolatry, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence on the growth of young people. If we simply worship the idols by imitating their hairstyles or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste us a great deal of money or time, endangering the efficiency of our work. On the contrary, we will lead a positive and fruitful life if we endeavor to improve ourselves by bridging the gap between our models and us. Accordingly, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life.

　　6. 08年范文：教材43頁(yè)

　　7.09年范文：考題見(jiàn)教材22頁(yè)

　　As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, a large number of people are surfing on line within a stretching spider web, either to entertain themselves or to meet the work's needs. Unfortunately, it seems rather ironic to present people separated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate. Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.

　　The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet. On the one hand, there is no denying that Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication. As a college student, I get on line every day to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through MSN Messenger with my friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life. That's why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and get alienated from others.

　　Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, Internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.

　　8、教材27頁(yè)：2000年高分作文(1)

　　9、教材40頁(yè)：05年高分作文

　　10、教材42頁(yè)：07年高分作文

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　　1、

　　過(guò)去幾年發(fā)生了一個(gè)現(xiàn)象：各行各業(yè)開(kāi)始出現(xiàn)了各種各樣的承諾。遺憾的是，相當(dāng)多的承諾純粹只是空話，正如漫畫(huà)中的這只母雞一樣，承諾下蛋不見(jiàn)棱見(jiàn)角，并保證有蛋皮、蛋清、蛋黃。

　　盡管這些承諾聽(tīng)起來(lái)奇怪有趣，但在全國(guó)各地都可以看到聽(tīng)到這樣的虛假承諾。管理部門(mén)保證不接受任何賄賂，公正有效地履行指責(zé);生產(chǎn)廠家保證生產(chǎn)高質(zhì)量產(chǎn)品;商業(yè)企業(yè)發(fā)誓提供真貨和禮貌熱情的服務(wù)。在這些所謂的承諾中，除了他們的義務(wù)、責(zé)任和工作之外，你還能發(fā)現(xiàn)任何新的和實(shí)質(zhì)性的東西嗎?我想你的答案將是否定的。事實(shí)上，他們做這種承諾的目的只是披上華麗的外衣以便取悅并欺騙公眾。

　　我認(rèn)為這個(gè)社會(huì)正在受到腐敗和欺騙的影響，這在物質(zhì)和道德上都在對(duì)社會(huì)造成了傷害。但這只母雞及其同類應(yīng)該知道：在市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)體系的激烈競(jìng)爭(zhēng)中，沒(méi)人能通過(guò)欺詐的言語(yǔ)而生存下去。他們應(yīng)該牢記這條諺語(yǔ)：“誠(chéng)實(shí)為上策”。

　　2、

　　當(dāng)我們用到“愛(ài)”這個(gè)詞時(shí)，我們不僅僅指對(duì)異性的吸引，這是對(duì)這個(gè)詞非常狹隘的解釋。下面的圖畫(huà)注解了愛(ài)的真正含義，它強(qiáng)調(diào)了愛(ài)心是情感的力量，不論我們周圍的世界多么黑暗，愛(ài)心都能支撐我們。事實(shí)上，歷史上處于不同文化中的人們都把愛(ài)當(dāng)作人類最高尚的情感。

　　舉一個(gè)例子證明愛(ài)心的力量，我們應(yīng)該記得中國(guó)各族人民如何響應(yīng)號(hào)召去支援四川地震中的受難者。盡管他們的收入按照國(guó)際標(biāo)準(zhǔn)衡量還是處于低水平，但是全國(guó)人民毫不猶豫地盡他們所能捐獻(xiàn)——不管是錢(qián)，還是物品——去幫助那些受難的同胞們。并且，他們這么做不考慮自己的得失。

　　我認(rèn)為，表示愛(ài)心的最好方式是幫助比我們更加不幸的人。我們應(yīng)該隨時(shí)準(zhǔn)備向有困難的人伸出援助之手，無(wú)論他們是家庭成員還是素昧平生。這樣，我們能夠助一臂之力把世界變成一個(gè)更美好的地方，因?yàn)�，正如圖畫(huà)所描繪的，悲傷的陰影越黑暗，愛(ài)心之燈的光芒就越閃亮。

　　3、

　　這幅圖畫(huà)生動(dòng)描述了一位可愛(ài)的美國(guó)小女孩身穿傳統(tǒng)的中國(guó)服裝，面帶甜蜜的微笑。她戴著具有某個(gè)中國(guó)少數(shù)民族服飾特征的發(fā)帶、項(xiàng)鏈和其他裝飾品。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這套服裝為她美麗的外表增添了東方的魅力。

　　這幅圖畫(huà)所表達(dá)的遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不只是一種新的時(shí)尚潮流。反之，它具有文化內(nèi)涵。神秘的中國(guó)文化吸引了各國(guó)人民這一事實(shí)，顯示了在某種程度上，一種文化可以被國(guó)際性地接受、尊重、欣賞和分享。換而言之，一個(gè)民族獨(dú)特的文化可以通過(guò)全球性的經(jīng)濟(jì)和文化交流走向世界。由于全球化潮流不可阻擋，所以文化交流可以有效增進(jìn)相互間的理解和友誼。

　　在我看來(lái)，我們應(yīng)該保存和珍惜作為無(wú)價(jià)精神財(cái)富的民族文化。同時(shí)，我們很有必要推廣世界文化，因?yàn)閬?lái)自其他文化的觀點(diǎn)，即使乍看起來(lái)相互矛盾或荒謬，但從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)看來(lái)，可以為我們觀察這個(gè)世界提供一種不同的視角。然而，在我們面臨不同文化時(shí)，應(yīng)該充滿理智地取其精華、去其糟粕。只有這樣我們才能積極發(fā)展民族文化，并使我們的世界豐富多元、五顏六色、充滿活力。

　　4、

　　上述這組圖生動(dòng)描述了一朵鮮花在不同環(huán)境中的命運(yùn)。如第一幅漫畫(huà)所示，這朵鮮花被放在舒適的溫室里，保護(hù)它免于可怕的閃電和風(fēng)雨。擁有合適的溫度、濕度和肥料，鮮花正在充分綻放。相反，當(dāng)被搬出溫室并暴露在風(fēng)雨之下時(shí)，鮮花很快就凋謝枯萎了，花瓣散落一地。

　　首先，這些圖畫(huà)的目的是告訴我們溫室花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨，然而我們應(yīng)該認(rèn)真對(duì)待它們所微妙傳達(dá)的的象征含義。這朵嬌弱的鮮花自然和我們的年輕人聯(lián)系起來(lái)，具體而言，就是當(dāng)代社會(huì)的獨(dú)生子女。溫室是保護(hù)孩子免受風(fēng)雨的父母溺愛(ài)和優(yōu)越物質(zhì)條件的縮影，而風(fēng)雨就是嚴(yán)峻的現(xiàn)實(shí)。一旦年輕人開(kāi)始尋求獨(dú)立并且接受來(lái)自現(xiàn)實(shí)世界的挑戰(zhàn)，人們發(fā)現(xiàn)他們已經(jīng)被慣壞了，在困難面前無(wú)法足夠堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。

　　總之，我們很有必要從這些發(fā)人深思的圖畫(huà)中得出積極的含義。一方面，我們可以經(jīng)常利用它們來(lái)啟發(fā)年輕人在生活中更加獨(dú)立。另一方面，父母?jìng)儜?yīng)該充滿理智給孩子們更多自由來(lái)處理困難和問(wèn)題。只有經(jīng)歷更多的挑戰(zhàn)和磨練，年輕人才能培養(yǎng)強(qiáng)大的個(gè)性和能力，而且只有這樣他們才能成為這個(gè)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)世界中的強(qiáng)者。

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　　以上的照片生動(dòng)地顯示出來(lái)，相貌英俊的英國(guó)足球巨星貝克漢姆在年輕人中廣受歡迎。在第一張照片中，貝克漢姆的名字出現(xiàn)在一個(gè)年輕人的額頭上。文字表明：對(duì)偶像的崇拜寫(xiě)在了臉上。在第二張照片中，這個(gè)年輕人正在理發(fā)店中做貝克漢姆的時(shí)髦發(fā)型。我們得到的信息是他正花300元來(lái)模仿偶像的發(fā)式。

　　毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，照片巧妙地反映了這樣一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象：偶像崇拜目前在青年人中非常盛行。貝克漢姆代表了體育界英雄的形象，他的英俊外表以及高超的球技正是球迷們熱情追捧的。同樣，2005年中國(guó)舉辦的“超級(jí)女生”大賽中，幾個(gè)十幾歲的女孩一夜成名。圍繞著崇拜這些偶像的意義和危害，這個(gè)事件激起了全國(guó)性的爭(zhēng)論�？傊�，青年人往往容易崇拜那些在外表、才華和特長(zhǎng)方面極其出色的人。

　　在我看來(lái)，偶像崇拜這個(gè)發(fā)人深思的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，其實(shí)是把雙刃劍，可以深刻影響青年人成長(zhǎng)。如果我們只是靠模仿偶像發(fā)型或追逐時(shí)尚的方式來(lái)崇拜他們，這種癡迷將必定浪費(fèi)我們大量的金錢(qián)和時(shí)間，影響我們的工作效率。相反，如果我們靠彌補(bǔ)我們和榜樣之間的差距來(lái)努力提高自己，我們就會(huì)過(guò)一種積極和收獲顯著的生活。因此，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)采取后面一種態(tài)度來(lái)指引我們的人生。

　　6、

　　如圖畫(huà)中生動(dòng)所示，盡管每人只有一條腿，但是兩個(gè)殘疾人通過(guò)團(tuán)隊(duì)合作正在快速奔跑。顯而易見(jiàn)，正是合作才使得他們走南闖北成為可能。

　　盡管這幅圖畫(huà)很簡(jiǎn)單，但它向我們表達(dá)了發(fā)人深思的含義。隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)和社會(huì)的發(fā)展，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)日漸激烈。任何人都無(wú)法完全獨(dú)立完成一份工作。因此，越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始重視團(tuán)隊(duì)合作。事實(shí)上，普遍公認(rèn)合作的能力是想要獲得成功的任何人都應(yīng)該具備的最重要的素質(zhì)。

　　因此，我們迫切需要采取措施來(lái)提高人們的合作意識(shí)。我們應(yīng)該牢記合作對(duì)于社會(huì)和自身都非常重要。每個(gè)人都應(yīng)擁有合作的能力。只有這樣我們才能獲得成功，而且只有這樣社會(huì)才能變得更加和諧。

　　7、

　　這幅漫畫(huà)象征性地闡釋了無(wú)論是為了自我?jiàn)蕵?lè)還是適應(yīng)工作的需求，很多人在一個(gè)拉伸的蜘蛛網(wǎng)之內(nèi)網(wǎng)上沖浪。然而，看來(lái)相當(dāng)諷刺的地方是，這幅圖呈現(xiàn)了他們?cè)谠噲D互相交流的同時(shí)，卻被蜘蛛網(wǎng)彼此隔開(kāi)。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這個(gè)蜘蛛網(wǎng)作為互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的一種象征，既連接了人們，又使他們彼此隔離。

　　這幅比喻并使人印象深刻的圖畫(huà)象征性揭示了人與互聯(lián)網(wǎng)之間的雙重關(guān)系。一方面，不可否認(rèn)網(wǎng)絡(luò)目前是用于人際交流的最高效媒介之一。作為一名大學(xué)生，我每天上網(wǎng)與他人在BBS上討論新聞，通過(guò)注冊(cè)網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，借助MSN和我的朋友們免費(fèi)聊天。但另一方面，很多人承認(rèn)他們太沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)而不愿與朋友和同事保持面對(duì)面接觸。一旦沉迷于這種虛幻世界，人們不愿接近他人并關(guān)注現(xiàn)實(shí)生活。這就是一些人喪失了直接溝通技能并與他人疏遠(yuǎn)的原因。

　　因此，我們很有必要以一種合理的方式使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，避免過(guò)度沉迷。畢竟，人們發(fā)明互聯(lián)網(wǎng)是為了連接你和我，為我們的生活帶來(lái)方便，而非設(shè)置障礙使人彼此疏遠(yuǎn)。

　　8、

　　如圖所示，我們可以清楚看出隨著商業(yè)捕魚(yú)的發(fā)展，魚(yú)的數(shù)量明顯下降。在一幅圖中，1900年有很多種魚(yú)，只有一艘捕魚(yú)船。相反，在1995年，只有一條魚(yú)，但是漁船很多。

　　這些圖畫(huà)的目的是告訴我們應(yīng)該充分重視海洋資源的減少。由于過(guò)渡捕撈，魚(yú)的數(shù)量明顯下降。如果我們讓這種情況聽(tīng)之任之，我們不知道魚(yú)的未來(lái)在哪。到那個(gè)時(shí)候，我們的環(huán)境將遭受巨大的破壞。

　　因此，我們很有必要采取嚴(yán)厲措施。一方面，我們應(yīng)該呼吁政府制定嚴(yán)格的法律控制商業(yè)捕魚(yú)。另一方面，我們應(yīng)該提高人們的意識(shí)：海洋資源對(duì)我們非常重要。只有這樣才能保護(hù)我們的海洋資源。同時(shí)，我認(rèn)為我們?nèi)祟惸軌蚩朔�這個(gè)困難，并將擁有美好的未來(lái)。

　　9、

　　這幅圖畫(huà)反映了一些中國(guó)家庭中普遍存在的現(xiàn)象——子女成年后如何對(duì)待他們的父母。當(dāng)父母年齡太大，不能照顧自己的時(shí)候，他們就成了負(fù)擔(dān)，被自己的子女們像足球一樣踢來(lái)踢去。這是一種不公正的可鄙現(xiàn)象，引起了很多中國(guó)人的憤慨。

　　作為一個(gè)以很多美德聞名于世的民族，中國(guó)人民自古以來(lái)一直奉行孝道。許多廣為傳頌的故事反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)了這種歷史悠久的愛(ài)老敬老的傳統(tǒng)，如西漢時(shí)緹縈舍身營(yíng)救蒙冤的父親免于肉刑的故事。

　　那些千方百計(jì)逃避照顧雙親的責(zé)任的子女們應(yīng)該牢記，他們?cè)诔錾�和成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中虧欠父母太多了。沒(méi)有父母關(guān)懷備至的照料和不懈的工作，他們?cè)跄芙】党砷L(zhǎng)并且取得成功?他們?cè)跄芘按�父母而不受到良心的譴責(zé)?

　　我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該遵守從祖先那里傳承下來(lái)的美德。只有這樣我們才能無(wú)愧為中國(guó)人。

　　10、

　　如圖所示，一場(chǎng)足球賽正在進(jìn)行。左邊的人似乎在守一個(gè)對(duì)于射門(mén)輕而易舉、不可避免的“大門(mén)”，而右邊的人由于擁有關(guān)于“巨大守門(mén)員”的幻覺(jué)，踢球很猶豫。顯而易見(jiàn)，他們兩個(gè)人都夸大了面前的困難。

　　這幅圖畫(huà)確實(shí)反映了一個(gè)目前在中國(guó)很普遍同時(shí)發(fā)人深思的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。由于問(wèn)題超出他們應(yīng)對(duì)的能力，年輕人總是放棄。表面上看，這幅圖畫(huà)似乎有一些道理，但當(dāng)我們仔細(xì)思考時(shí)，我們就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)在這個(gè)現(xiàn)象之下有一個(gè)明顯的趨勢(shì)：缺乏自信。首先，眾所周知，我們生活在一個(gè)充滿各種困難的多元化世界。我們別無(wú)選擇，只能面對(duì)。其次，態(tài)度是采取第一步的關(guān)鍵。擁有勇氣和信心來(lái)解決問(wèn)題，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題并非你想象的那么“嚴(yán)重”。以我們自己為例，研究生入學(xué)考試似乎是我們面前的一個(gè)可怕的怪物。有些人放棄了，而有些人則堅(jiān)持了下來(lái)。因此，擁有信心和對(duì)困難的正確估計(jì)，并且竭盡全力，我們就將解決所有的問(wèn)題。

　　總而言之，我認(rèn)為我們年輕人應(yīng)該以正確的方式面對(duì)困難。世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人。

　　五、大綱解讀：兩大黃金原則(大綱見(jiàn)新教材PP.1-2)

　　1. 印象原則：書(shū)寫(xiě)工整、卷面整潔、字跡清晰

　　2. 語(yǔ)言第一位、結(jié)構(gòu)第二位、內(nèi)容第三位

　　1) 語(yǔ)言：

　　(1) 基本正確

　　(2) 豐富多變

　　2) 結(jié)構(gòu)：邏輯性

　　(1) 段落結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總

　　A. 主題句：1句

　　B. 描述或論證：2-3句

　　C. (小結(jié)：1句)

　　(2) 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　A. 關(guān)聯(lián)詞

　　B. 同義替換

　　C. 代詞替換

　　3)內(nèi)容：不跑題